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I know I probably am looking at a tongue lashing -

But I think this site turned out pretty well.

I would love to hear your Positive and negative opinion. Honest of course - this is how I learn.

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The site overall works nicely design wise. This is perhaps a problem with what you were given to work with but on quite a few of the pages there seems to be a little too much text - it could do with being broken up by some images too.

and I think the same goes for overall site, a few more images just to jazz it up a bit. Apart from that looks good, and like the store!

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Thank you!

I totally agree w the too many words… I was thinking of an accordion so that it does not look too much - but yet people get the info -what do you think?

Images - we can do that.
Thanks again
I will post w changes

J
On Feb 19, 2010, at 6:27 PM, Fergus T wrote:

The site overall works nicely design wise. This is perhaps a problem with what you were given to work with but on quite a few of the pages there seems to be a little too much text - it could do with being broken up by some images too.

and I think the same goes for overall site, a few more images just to jazz it up a bit. Apart from that looks good, and like the store!

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Hi,

I agree with the above comment. You need some images to help the pages flow. Too much reading is a turn off for a lot of people.
I tried to submit a question on your contact page but whatever I entered took me to the error page !

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Thank you.
It worked when I tested it but I will check it again.

I agree also w the words… Maybe I will do an accordion with drop
Down info

WhT do you think?

J

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Hi,

I agree with the above comment. You need some images to help the
pages flow. Too much reading is a turn off for a lot of people.
I tried to submit a question on your contact page but whatever I
entered took me to the error page !

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Neil,

Just tried it again with all the fields filled -and it went to the success page.

Here is a question for all:

how do I mark the specific fields needed (behind the scenes) so if all the want to give is name and email they can?

Thank you

J
On Feb 20, 2010, at 4:37 AM, neil wrote:

Hi,

I agree with the above comment. You need some images to help the pages flow. Too much reading is a turn off for a lot of people.
I tried to submit a question on your contact page but whatever I entered took me to the error page !

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Hi,

I have successfully submitted a test.

Your validation procedure checks for a correct email address.
This is why my test failed earlier !

You need to remove the validation checks for the fields that you don’t mind if people don’t complete. Only have validation for the fields you definitely require.


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