I know you have been watching me “struggle” learning
I want to let you know I stepped back for the past 2 weeks from all
and then punted
I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it
does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the
screen shot.
ALso, ecommerce - I have learned how to “personalize” zen cart -
please take a look - just FYI I created the graphic on the background
(sides)
(not my color choices for the sideboxes - but the customer is paying)
Thank you David, Gary and Walter for your help and advice w this
On 8 Dec 2009, at 17:13, julie maxwell allen wrote:
I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the screen shot.
Julie, congratulations on styling the Blog; from a visual point of view you’ve done a great job. I do think though that the paragraph beginning ‘Think about all those businesses’ needs extensive rewriting; there a several grammatical errors, at least one typo (“it help you” should be “it helps you”) and the whole thing reads oddly.
Julie
On Dec 8, 2009, at 1:22 PM, Paul Bradforth wrote:
On 8 Dec 2009, at 17:13, julie maxwell allen wrote:
I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it
does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the
screen shot.
Julie, congratulations on styling the Blog; from a visual point of
view you’ve done a great job. I do think though that the paragraph
beginning ‘Think about all those businesses’ needs extensive
rewriting; there a several grammatical errors, at least one typo
(“it help you” should be “it helps you”) and the whole thing reads
oddly.
On 8 Dec 2009, at 18:58, julie maxwell allen wrote:
I did tweak the blog so it is smoother.
You still have apostrophes in ‘MDs’ and ‘FAQs’. Plurals don’t have apostrophes.
There’s another typo now; ‘then’ instead of ‘than’. Also, the construction of the sentence is wrong: “The MD with a website and information for both their patients and potential patients would be most likely to maintain their client base then an MD without a web site.” The word ‘most’ there should be ‘more’, as you can’t say ‘most likely than’ an MD etc.
J
On Dec 8, 2009, at 2:21 PM, Paul Bradforth wrote:
On 8 Dec 2009, at 18:58, julie maxwell allen wrote:
I did tweak the blog so it is smoother.
You still have apostrophes in ‘MDs’ and ‘FAQs’. Plurals don’t have
apostrophes.
There’s another typo now; ‘then’ instead of ‘than’. Also, the
construction of the sentence is wrong: “The MD with a website and
information for both their patients and potential patients would be
most likely to maintain their client base then an MD without a web
site.” The word ‘most’ there should be ‘more’, as you can’t say
‘most likely than’ an MD etc.
I have been recently shooting writing to a friend that is proofing
to avoid this. but I did not this time.
It is wise to know your strengths and weaknesses. Work on your
attention to detail and keep having your copy (text) checked. If your
friend starts getting a bit weary of this you should take a look at http://wordyhq.com/
This is a startup and has only just launched, so ping him a query.
The CEO presented his pitch just before I got up to talk at the Le
Web conference this afternoon. (BTW, for a blurry shot of me
discussing Hyperwords see Discover #hyperwords @leweb start up compétition very useful )
I have been recently shooting writing to a friend that is proofing
to avoid this. but I did not this time.
It is wise to know your strengths and weaknesses. Work on your
attention to detail and keep having your copy (text) checked. If
your friend starts getting a bit weary of this you should take a
look at http://wordyhq.com/
This is a startup and has only just launched, so ping him a query.
The CEO presented his pitch just before I got up to talk at the Le
Web conference this afternoon. (BTW, for a blurry shot of me
discussing Hyperwords see Discover #hyperwords @leweb start up compétition very useful )