Update - swimmer35

Ladies and Gents,

I know you have been watching me “struggle” learning

I want to let you know I stepped back for the past 2 weeks from all
and then punted

I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it
does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the
screen shot.

http://www.grassrootsweb.net

(under blog on the CSS menu)

ALso, ecommerce - I have learned how to “personalize” zen cart -
please take a look - just FYI I created the graphic on the background
(sides)
(not my color choices for the sideboxes - but the customer is paying)
Thank you David, Gary and Walter for your help and advice w this

http://www.snugabugz.com

Hope all is well w you.
Love to hear what you think.

Julie


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On 8 Dec 2009, at 17:13, julie maxwell allen wrote:

I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the screen shot.

http://www.grassrootsweb.net

(under blog on the CSS menu)

Julie, congratulations on styling the Blog; from a visual point of view you’ve done a great job. I do think though that the paragraph beginning ‘Think about all those businesses’ needs extensive rewriting; there a several grammatical errors, at least one typo (“it help you” should be “it helps you”) and the whole thing reads oddly.

best wishes,

Paul Bradforth

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Paul,

Thank you so much. I am glad it looks good.

I did tweak the blog so it is smoother.

Thank you for all your input.

Julie
On Dec 8, 2009, at 1:22 PM, Paul Bradforth wrote:

On 8 Dec 2009, at 17:13, julie maxwell allen wrote:

I have gotten the blog! yeah and it looks good - I really think it
does.
Thank you all for all of your input and help. - Kudos Dan J for the
screen shot.

http://www.grassrootsweb.net

(under blog on the CSS menu)

Julie, congratulations on styling the Blog; from a visual point of
view you’ve done a great job. I do think though that the paragraph
beginning ‘Think about all those businesses’ needs extensive
rewriting; there a several grammatical errors, at least one typo
(“it help you” should be “it helps you”) and the whole thing reads
oddly.

best wishes,

Paul Bradforth

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Hi, it's ebOOxa


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On 8 Dec 2009, at 18:58, julie maxwell allen wrote:

I did tweak the blog so it is smoother.

You still have apostrophes in ‘MDs’ and ‘FAQs’. Plurals don’t have apostrophes.

There’s another typo now; ‘then’ instead of ‘than’. Also, the construction of the sentence is wrong: “The MD with a website and information for both their patients and potential patients would be most likely to maintain their client base then an MD without a web site.” The word ‘most’ there should be ‘more’, as you can’t say ‘most likely than’ an MD etc.

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Thank you Paul… off to fix.

J
On Dec 8, 2009, at 2:21 PM, Paul Bradforth wrote:

On 8 Dec 2009, at 18:58, julie maxwell allen wrote:

I did tweak the blog so it is smoother.

You still have apostrophes in ‘MDs’ and ‘FAQs’. Plurals don’t have
apostrophes.

There’s another typo now; ‘then’ instead of ‘than’. Also, the
construction of the sentence is wrong: “The MD with a website and
information for both their patients and potential patients would be
most likely to maintain their client base then an MD without a web
site.” The word ‘most’ there should be ‘more’, as you can’t say
‘most likely than’ an MD etc.

best wishes,

Paul Bradforth

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Hi, it's ebOOxa


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Missing image on the snuga site + what Paul said. You really need to improve your copy writing and proofing.

<img src="images/banners/holidaybanner.jpg" alt="Snugabugz Holiday Banner" title=" Snugabugz Holiday Banner " width="100" height="80">

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Hi Dave,

I am not using that banner I did at first and now I went back to her
primary banner. So it really is not missing.

but I will go into the css and remove it. - Thank you.

I know I do, I am working on it… but hey, I got the blog design down
and the zen cart - big steps there LOL

Thank you

J
On Dec 8, 2009, at 2:26 PM, DeltaDave wrote:

Missing image on the snuga site + what Paul said. You really need to
improve your copy writing and proofing.

<img src="images/banners/holidaybanner.jpg" alt="Snugabugz Holiday  
Banner" title=" Snugabugz Holiday Banner " width="100" height="80">

David


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Yes - but these are basic things that are going to make a potential client run screaming into the arms of another web designer.

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you are right - I have been recently shooting writing to a friend
that is proofing to avoid this. but I did not this time.

J
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Yes - but these are basic things that are going to make a potential
client run screaming into the arms of another web designer.

D


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I have been recently shooting writing to a friend that is proofing
to avoid this. but I did not this time.

It is wise to know your strengths and weaknesses. Work on your
attention to detail and keep having your copy (text) checked. If your
friend starts getting a bit weary of this you should take a look at
http://wordyhq.com/

This is a startup and has only just launched, so ping him a query.
The CEO presented his pitch just before I got up to talk at the Le
Web conference this afternoon. (BTW, for a blurry shot of me
discussing Hyperwords see Discover #hyperwords @leweb start up compétition very useful )

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Thank you Thats why i started to do that.

J
On Dec 9, 2009, at 1:08 PM, Keith Martin wrote:

I have been recently shooting writing to a friend that is proofing
to avoid this. but I did not this time.

It is wise to know your strengths and weaknesses. Work on your
attention to detail and keep having your copy (text) checked. If
your friend starts getting a bit weary of this you should take a
look at http://wordyhq.com/

This is a startup and has only just launched, so ping him a query.
The CEO presented his pitch just before I got up to talk at the Le
Web conference this afternoon. (BTW, for a blurry shot of me
discussing Hyperwords see Discover #hyperwords @leweb start up compétition very useful )

k


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